Jim, My 2 cents (for free)! Take it at face value!!
Looks busy up there!! I would have tried to have the diagonal from the main hoop intersect the top bar( over the drivers door) in line with the roof diagonal. Move that connection rearward approx 3-4 inches, maybe downward on the main hoop 3 or 4 inches as well.
It looks as if the "extra" bar from the base of the a-pillar is bent part way up, this defeats the main structure of that bar, "pre failing" it. If loaded from the top i.e. upside down, that bar will fold quickly, much the way a hood is designed to buckle in a head-on accident. It looks like the a-pillar/ top bar could be made a bit closer to the chassis itself, and maybe extended further forward toward the a-pillar.
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